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The Bullet Hole
Contributed by
Dragontear27
on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 11:10:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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An instant pain tearing through my chest
I fall to the ground and fall into a rest
a bullet has blown through my heart
my love enternily falling apart
bleeding onto the floor as I clutch the hole
fearing that death would take my soul
yet the only thoughts I really had as I laid there dying
was the thought of you seldomly crying
that's all I really ever thought about
was you...i've always cared for you without a shadow of a doubt
I wish you could only understand
that this didn't turned out the way I had planned
I never got to hold you in my arms to keep you from your fears
and it always seemed that I only provoked all those tears
good intentions always end up leaving a bad scar
and with this bullet in my chest.....well you know what mine are.
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Dragontear27
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2006-06-06 23:10:05]
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Re: The Bullet Hole
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 11:59:01 PM AEST
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--that's all I really ever thought about
was you...i've always cared for you without a shadow of a doubt-- nice.... good write. i liked this, sad but well written! A+++ |
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Re: The Bullet Hole
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by bronzen on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 03:50:35 PM AEST
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| yes sad and emotional but good write |
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Re: The Bullet Hole
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by droughp on
Saturday, 8th September 2007 @ 08:36:44 AM AEST
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Aww, so sweet. I love your poetry, it flows smoothly and portrays emotion.
Well done. |
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