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Thinning
Contributed by
darkscorpio
on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Little girl lost, alone and in pain
Claw at the walls that surround you in vain
You finally found, the weapon to use
To get back at your parents, strike at their abuse
The lack of reason at sixteen
I've lived it once, hate so pristine
I've seen the look inside your eyes
Low self esteem, internal death
The crave for revenge, with your last breath
Destroy their heart, destroy their lies
Destroy yourself, soul starts to die
Hurt yourself, to get their goat
By ramming fingers down your throat
Thinning body, dying mind
Because of life, that's so unkind
Thinning hair and sunken cheeks
Lost will to live, your future's bleak
Emotional war, all involved will lose
Destroyed in the process, by drugs and by booze
You're just a kid, growing up too fast
Thinning to extinction,
...I pray you last
9/23/98
Copyright ©
darkscorpio
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2003-02-08 01:00:00]
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Re: Thinning
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 02:27:15 AM AEST
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| another great write |
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Re: Thinning
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by Delusions on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 05:06:02 AM AEST
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awsome poem... very sad... keep it up,
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Re: Thinning
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 08:51:54 PM AEST
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This sent shivers down my spine. You have a talent rarely seen. I loved this so much emotion and pain shoved into this poem Very well written.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Thinning
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 08:06:10 PM AEST
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| This is amazing....wow! |
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