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Sunlite lines of the one who is the importance
Contributed by
brew
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Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 09:20:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The essence, that makes one feel high
Appealing of ones ora and more
They have said all the right words
But...
Have they felt the inner of them
Lines which tell a story
Given to you, and "ONLY" you
Feelings exchanged, but are they for real?
Turning of others minds and soul
For many would give for what is taken
Flowing music that intertwines with hope
Its twisted and felt....through more than inner soul
But, soon its taken away, with a tear left to drop
you think of starting over
Sighs..
Not worth the new or hurt again
Just know you have the inner sun
It WONT stop ever
So no sighing
No crying
Just let the rays enter , and the flow will continue
I know......Im ME...
Copyright ©
brew
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2006-06-06 21:20:30]
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Re: Sunlite lines of the one who is the importance
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 09:57:09 PM AEST
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Yes u r one of a kind dayna a straight foward poem right from the heart beautifully done as only u can write..
((((( brew)))))))
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Re: Sunlite lines of the one who is the importance
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 10:42:15 PM AEST
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awsome job on this piece.
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Re: Sunlite lines of the one who is the importance
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 12:24:09 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Sunlite lines of the one who is the importance
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 02:23:13 AM AEST
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Dayna~
my sweet friend a most beautiful, deep and heart felt write. You are always known to write from the depths of ur beautiful heart.
I should act on ur sound advice my dear friend. Very well penned by a very special Miss. Well done Dayna~ shine on sweetie
love n hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Sunlite lines of the one who is the importance
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 06:19:02 AM AEST
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Interesting and thought provoking...
Hope all is well with you.....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Sunlite lines of the one who is the importance
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 10:52:56 AM AEST
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Beautiful write Dayna.
Full of thought provoking admonitions. Sad in places,
but so uplifting in the end. You are definitely YOU!
Keep writing- truth and clarity shall be yours. You
will it into being!! Never stop believing!
~Breezy
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Re: Sunlite lines of the one who is the importance
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 02:55:36 PM AEST
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Oh so very true and well said!!
It may not always be easy....but yes the answer comes from within ourselves....(even if it takes a bit of help to bring it forth!) |
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Re: Sunlite lines of the one who is the importance
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 11:39:03 AM AEST
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This too is exceptional, the last line makes the rest a being!
I know..........I'm ME............How comforting for you, how many really know their own?
Not many I'd venture to say..........
Opening your heart to Love will never let you down. Even if you're slighted.......you're still YOU, or as you said, "ME"
Warm love
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