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Confusion
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 07:21:07 PM in AEST
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So once again here I sit
Alone, depressed, lost…
I don’t know which way to go,
Which path I should take, or what I should feel
And I fear I never will.
I want to follow my screaming heart,
But my loyalty deafens me…
I have tried to stop these feelings,
For the good of a friendship.
But I struggle in vain, unable to gain control…
I beg of you now…
Simply glance my way with love in your eyes,
Warm my soul with your smile…
Let me know that there ARE things worth living for,
Giving my life some sort of meaning…
For I have forgotten life’s value…
And without insight
To its priceless ness
Or importance…
I’m afraid I may also be forgotten…
I don’t know the answers to my questions
So I continue on my search.
I only hope one day my journey will end…
And that the path will lead me,
Right into your open arms…
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Re: Confusion
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by ham323 on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 07:53:00 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem. Sad tone to it. But yet the ending sounds so sure and warming. Hm. Five stars for youuu. ! |
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Re: Confusion
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by candysears on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 08:11:05 PM AEST
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This is a very good write..
Simply beautiful...
God Bless! |
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Re: Confusion
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by brew on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 08:59:06 PM AEST
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Chris, Chris.......Just go to her.! YOU know you should.! Why continue, it, that hurts.! I hope ALL the best for you, I really do.!
Hugs
Brew!~ |
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Re: Confusion
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by Shmokin on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 09:19:32 PM AEST
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| nice peice, has a 'lost' feeling about it, much enjoyed, thanx for sharing :-) |
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Re: Confusion
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by wikedladi on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 04:34:39 PM AEST
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| I love it! its so simple and yet speaks so much at the same time! Good job! : P |
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Re: Confusion
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 04:58:55 PM AEST
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| I know this feeling oh so well. The arms are not closed. |
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Re: Confusion
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by DarkFaerie on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 07:39:20 PM AEST
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| I've loved this poem ever since you wrote it for me. I'm so glad you reposted it. It is a masterpiece. :D |
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