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Loathe
Contributed by
darkscorpio
on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Walk away from the addiction
Try to stop that urge for friction
In my mind and in my head
I hate you I want you dead
Thinking bout the past, in a time
When I hurt and had the rhyme
Words pour out, like my tears
Look at all these wasted years
In the kitchen all alone
Not asleep, but no ones home
Mindless slave, to this *****
Resentment, an endless pit
When can I crawl out of this hole that exists in my mind?
When can I realize I’m loved, and I have little time?
Family new, the past is gone, except inside my head
Will I ever learn this lesson?
Use it well, or will it be shed
Reaching out, for someone
To take this pain and shut it down
All this regret and hurt I loathe
Want to stick it six feet underground
In a grave, where it belongs
Instead of writing these ***** up songs
I want to kill it, destroy the past
But I fear I will not last
I hate what’s here, what I’ve become
A mindless slave to everyone
That’s ever hurt me, made me bleed
Long time ago planted a seed
Inside my soul, and I cry tears
Of blood, and waste so many years
I want this sickness out of me
I want to wake up and be free
Instead of sitting in this room
With all these feelings of dark gloom
I have a child I have a wife
I want my g*dd**n f**k**g life back
Let me go, let me go now
I’ll get through this somehow….
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darkscorpio
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2003-02-08 00:40:00]
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Re: Loathe
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by TheSpiritx on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 12:56:53 AM AEST
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| Very nice. I enjoyed the rhyming and context of the poem. |
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Re: Loathe
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 02:25:19 AM AEST
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| that is the strongest poem i have read on this site yet, the depth of feelimg in it is immense |
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Re: Loathe
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 08:46:44 PM AEST
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Wow... I'm at a loss for words very strongly written poem. I enjoyed this a lot. Wow...
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