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Sirius
Contributed by
R0b
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Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 06:07:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sitting alone.
Waiting for a time.
A time to set it free.
Free from a glass prison.
To spread. To suffocate.
Guess when.
Go ahead take a guess.
What can it hurt?
It wont care whether youre wrong or right.
It will destroy either way.
Clear as day and night.
Past the prism of light.
Bending the rules to no end.
The light shines, yet no one sees.
How is this so?
You wanna take a guess at this too?
Maybe you should wait.
Decode what’s already been said.
And say it back.
What do they mean?
The book has been closed.
Sealing off any answers.
So where do you go from here.
Where?
Well, that’s the question on everyone’s mind…
2-17-06
R0b
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Re: Sirius
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by Shmokin on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 09:21:56 PM AEST
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Re: Sirius
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 11:19:58 AM AEST
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This is really good.. I liked this one alot.. When I was reading it I could imagine you reading it out loud because the tone that you put into here was brillant.. I mean all poems have a tone and mood but the tone really stood out to me.. I hope that I am not confusing you.. I am kind of confusing myself.. HAHAHA.. well anyways.. This had great flow and though you always write about the same thing but differently I still enjoy reading your poems.. Maybe you should try and look at it from a different perspective or something.. I don't know.. well great poem babe.. I love you..
Love you
christina
and please keep posting and writing.. I enjoy reading your poems and I am glad that you write.. You are good at writing poems and just because you get hardly any comments you shouldn't stop writing.. |
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