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Tread Softly
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 05:11:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Tread softly on this Earth,
Take in every wonderful sight,
The beautiful sunrise in morning,
The wonderful moonlit night,
The land of milk and honey,
Its hedgerows bright and green,
Its rivers flow incessantly,
The likes we all have seen,
The cities always bustling,
The rat race at its best,
The people rushing everywhere,
Why don't they take a rest,
Take a trip out to the country,
And smell the country air,
Take in the fields and little lanes,
And you will see me there,
So tread this Earth so softly,
Take in each lovely sight,
Its beauty we behold,
Both by day and by night.
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jerseysue
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2006-06-06 17:11:06]
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Re: Tread Softly
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 02:16:59 AM AEST
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Sue~
Such beautiful imagery u cast into ur readers head. A most captivating and delightful read. You have done a fine job with this. Well done and I hope to read more of ur awesome writes.
warm huggers,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Tread Softly
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 07:12:42 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful and gentle reminder to make time to appreciate the earthly things we take for granted. Smooth rhyme, neat structure. And I do, all the time.
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Re: Tread Softly
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 04:11:52 PM AEST
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Spike done spoke the gentleness of this poem to which I agree. The places you took us, specially fresh milk 'n' honeycombed honey. mmmmmm! But one can tell you're a fine example o' country lady fer sure. Master's work, sue xxx whoops. slipped in extry 'cause o' finger spasm!
wabl
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Re: Tread Softly
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by mecatpurrson on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 03:50:07 AM AEST
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| Beautiful choice for a title, it's what drew me in. You did a great job of rhyming poetry, which is my favorite. Kudos. |
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