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Dark Wish
Contributed by
poetic_tragedy
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Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The wilted moon rises
And shimmers like diamonds
Stars like crystals
Some shoot like missils
The purple sky is dark
Black like a bruise
A blemish or a scar
It does anything but sooths
The dark sky inspires
Dark poems like this
And make you wish for anything
A fight or a kiss
Your dreams turn to nightmares
And you wake in a sweat
The thought of another day
Makes you wish that you were dead
You sigh and crawl out
Of your soft feather bed
Dreading the light
With all your might
You step onto the grass
And wish the dizziness would pass
You wish it were winter
You wish snow covered the ground
You wish you could die
Without a choked sound
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2003-02-08 00:20:00]
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Re: Dark Wish
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 02:11:04 AM AEST
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| great poem, great write |
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Re: Dark Wish
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by fancyface4898 on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 05:13:20 PM AEST
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| that is a very good poem, but I think you might need a little help. all of your poems are good but from what I have read they are morbid and full of you wanting death |
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Re: Dark Wish
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 08:43:29 PM AEST
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Wow this was excellent and in reply to an earlier comment not morbid, but beautiful in its imagery and emotion and the message conveyed. I loved this... never stop writing. I can relate to the above poem so much.
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