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Don't Stay
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 02:13:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Don't stay because you promised me,
If its not what you want please say,
For I know sometimes its hard for you,
When I call you both night and day,
Reasons don't always fit the rhyme,
Circumstances can be the cause,
Yes I have my reasons,
And I am sure that you have yours,
Being close to you is wonderful,
Being away from you is bad,
But leave me behind if you need to,
Even if it will make me sad,
Its because I care about you,
That I ask you this today,
To truthfully tell me how you feel,
And do you want to walk away,
Yes I will miss you so much,
If we decide to part,
But just remember always,
You will stay inside my heart.
Copyright ©
jerseysue
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Re: Don't Stay
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 03:25:30 AM AEST
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Very good write and I can see why he stays today 'cause u luv him enuff to give him up if he's not happy.
Awesome.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: Don't Stay
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 03:00:40 PM AEST
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Hey Sue, this poem done makes heartfelt and butterfly freedom proud. You put a universal kinda personal. Who'd wanna leave?
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Don't Stay
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by bronzen on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 03:17:05 PM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: Don't Stay
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 02:37:02 AM AEST
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Sue~
A truly gifted poetess whose beautiful heart is on display for all to see. You are a kind loving soul and ur man knows what he's got. I wish u both a lifetime of love and happiness together. Well done Sue~ shine on.
warm huggers,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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