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EverEssence Smiles
Contributed by
brew
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Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 08:17:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Finding a Flower in which becomes a Rose
It, buds...it blooms...it opens.......
Yet.it begins to stop...
Something takes what has started, and stops the process
It slowly fades into the blooming process, but one thinks why?
What stopped what was a new beginning...
Why the fall
Why the backwards, to the fall of no new
What can process the blooming , once more.......
Did one, just stop and think it would never
Seems it couldnt be seen
It couldnt be given
Now...Start another: Simple because the obvious...
NO!
Take the bud, hold and let it be shown...
BLOOM.....
Its ever so held so delicate...
It wont be stopped
It wont be let to die
APPREAR....Open, and great fullfillment......
Flow, rise, and grow.....
Keep what isnt so obvious, yet has "always: been inobvious
Copyright ©
brew
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2006-06-05 20:17:12]
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Re: EverEssence Smiles
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by wizard on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 10:55:23 PM AEST
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thanks for this brew...i enjoyed it immensely.
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Re: EverEssence Smiles
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by halli on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 06:18:56 PM AEST
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Great write brew i enjoyed it.
~hugs
halli
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Re: EverEssence Smiles
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 08:20:31 PM AEST
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Good stuff dayna-
I liked it
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Re: EverEssence Smiles
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 02:57:37 PM AEST
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| Your writes are always so fulll of triths and insightfulness.....thank you for that...and for this. |
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Re: EverEssence Smiles
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 07:47:14 PM AEST
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Dearest ~*Dayna*~
ur beautiful heart is always talking through ur magical pen. You quill the most beautiful, the most truthful and most enjoyable writes everytime. One is never disappointed when they venture ur pages for the contents are always so impressive and well worth the read. Well done sweet girl and keep penning down ur inner thoughts and emotions.
love n hugs,
~*suzie Q*~
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