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You have given me smiles
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 06:25:54 PM in AEST
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You have given me smiles...
The petals fly upon the wind,
Brushing every single face,
They wipe the tears back into place,
Underneath my misty eyes.
I know your heart is touching mine,
This friendship is more felt than told,
And though you're far I feel your hold,
Your hand is here, it's grasping strong,
And I've had this smile, all along.
~~~~~~~
For all of you...
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Re: You have given me smiles
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by Shmokin on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 06:47:04 PM AEST
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| nice sentiment , thanx for sharing :-) |
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Re: You have given me smiles
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by ever1der on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 07:30:05 PM AEST
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| truely beautiful. I never really look to see where people are from; It's just like a big world to me with no boundries because I wish that's the way it was. Over here people are sending their congressmen bricks..to build a fence between us and Mexico; I find that very sad..I guess I understand but still, it's sad. |
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Re: You have given me smiles
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 09:36:25 PM AEST
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Awww philly girl that is such a nice write.
I am sure they will love it.
we love you
hugs |
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Re: You have given me smiles
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 06:33:59 AM AEST
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very nicely done!
wizard |
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Re: You have given me smiles
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 10:09:46 AM AEST
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Knowing what I do of you without having met you, I know this is truely a deep and heartfelt bond that you share with all your friends, of which I consider myself one.
Thank you Phyllis. I and those of which you write surely feel the same way.
Hugs! |
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Re: You have given me smiles
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 04:01:34 PM AEST
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I have found your poetry meaningful and fun to read. I enjoy commenting on how your writes impact upon me; and I throughly enjoy
any comments that I receive.
Thanks for sharing Philly, my friend
Will |
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Re: You have given me smiles
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 08:28:35 PM AEST
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Beautifuly expressed. and deffinately well appreaciated. well worth the read.
((((Phill))))
Ben |
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Re: You have given me smiles
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 08:35:54 PM AEST
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Sweetie, this was beautiful. You are such a loving and
heart hugging soul. I'm sure they all feel as such about
you, as I do. : ) Funny how so many you've never even
met, (and some you have, however brief), can turn
into the most treasured of friends.
A soft, gentle write that touches one right in the heart.
I love you, chicklet!!
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: You have given me smiles
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by cheetham on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 09:41:43 PM AEST
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| Short and sweet, I like. |
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Re: You have given me smiles
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 09:39:47 PM AEST
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Philly ... of the smiles you have been given ... I hazard to guess ... you have passed as many, if not more, along to others in your own way. I thank you for those that you have given me.
Nazzy ~ |
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