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Smoldering Whisper
Contributed by
wikedladi
on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 04:23:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I can't stand the sound of your voice
The thought of a bullet rushing threw my brain is more pleasant to me
I'd glady stab you if given a choice
If you were normaly this would be easy to see
To hear your name makes my teeth gritt with anger
I hate all that you are and will ever be
I'd rather not know you, i'd rather you be a stranger
I can't get rid of you, i will never be set free
YOU are one person no one needs in their life
Thinking only of yourself, you ruin so many hearts
So ignorante and rude, you bring nothing but stife
SO blind to what you do, the process restarts
Masking your true intensions with lies
Wanting only want is just out of your means
On to a new lover while the last one still cries
You break great lovers, tearing at the seams
One day your greed will catch up with you
You'll feel the heart break you've caused for so others
Leaving you scared and lonely too
You'll be left empty handed with no lovers
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wikedladi
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2006-06-05 16:23:28]
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Re: Smoldering Whisper
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 04:40:18 PM AEST
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| pretty angry poem, cool style with this one, its a bit choppy but it works with the emotion. good job :) |
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Re: Smoldering Whisper
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 05:19:45 PM AEST
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| this remindes me of my feelings towards my old foster carer, Jean. ok we weren't lovers as such, but i still loved her... good write |
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Re: Smoldering Whisper
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by DarkFaerie on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 06:05:23 PM AEST
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| Great emotion. I could feel the hate shimmer off of the words. I love it. :D |
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