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Relentless
Contributed by
BRONZEN
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Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 04:16:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I fell in love at a young age
not knowing if we both were on the same page
I took up adult responsibilities to earn everyones trust
unfortunately not knowing it would end up in a bust
I was trying to uphold my vows with the utmost respect
in doing so I failed and that was hard to accept
The desires of my heart no one could understand
how it was pulling at me and everything else was going bland
Rendering myself relentless is all I could of done
living in the shadows of judgements I sometimes felt alone
Sometimes I felt I was on display
to be provoked at any cause knowingly down the line I would pay
I had an uncontrollable thirst for ambition beyond any admisssion
I had no time for baby steps an no virtue of patience
My willingness to be in front and not pushed to the back
only left room for my nature to attacked
While trying to build my career and progress with all success
only left my loved ones with so much to grasp and to suppress
Dont say Im selfish and that I dont care
I have an urge to persevere and that I wont spare
Relentless to whatever people thought I should do
I regulated my own life and came to terms with all truths
My personality was targeted for being pushy and too forward
if I succumb to negativity anything I do will not be warranted
Every action that I gave I received the wrong reaction
I stepped out of those situations to regain my self-satisfaction
Mistakes were made I regret them all
I walked too fast I had to learn to crawl
Copyright ©
BRONZEN
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2006-06-05 16:16:42]
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Re: Relentless
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 03:09:20 PM AEST
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A very good write indeed, like the song says
" The record shows u took the blows and did it your way " a poem of conviction, revealing an inner self revolution. Well done.
Ben
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Re: Relentless
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by Shmokin on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 09:32:59 PM AEST
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| I like this write although its hard to scan, im sure this would b a good candiate for performance poetry :-) |
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