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Title In Progress
Contributed by
AvARileDanimee
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Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 02:29:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Some constructive criticizm and help with a title would be GREATLY appreciated
My heart was at the tip of my tongue,
I should have let it speak to you.
Because then just maybe,
Maybe you'd be mine.
My heart was there ready to speak,
but i squashed its words and choked them down.
Yet it Begged to deliver its speach,
and what did i do? i slit it's throat,
and bled it to death
Why do i put myself through so much pain,
I ask that question to myself
but i damn well know the answer
Because that pain is so much less than everything else,
And knowing that I have something to reach for,
brings light into the darkness of life
it brings joy to even the saddest of days
but it wrings my heart out
and sucks its life away.
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AvARileDanimee
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2006-06-05 14:29:04]
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Re: Title In Progress
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by bronzen on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 03:15:18 PM AEST
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Re: Title In Progress
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 09:42:56 AM AEST
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| this is a great heartfelt poem. Keep up the great work! |
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