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Idle Muse
Contributed by
Merry
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Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 01:13:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Cold glass window overlooking
Colorful gardens
As far away as fingertips
Spider watches me
Tangled in my clumsy web
Kisses always sent
With wishes for something
Not forthcoming
Desire so much sweeter
Than truth
Uttered in splattered mirrors
Between clenched teeth
No compassion in the eyes
Making peace with time
A daily battle to be fought
Finding a reason to go on
The ending is already written
Sighing against a cold glass window
Wishing it could be different
But it’s not
Copyright ©
Merry
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2006-06-05 13:13:17]
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Re: Idle Muse
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by bronzen on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 03:32:08 PM AEST
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Re: Idle Muse
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 05:54:30 PM AEST
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"Desire so much sweeter
Than truth"
Oh, what reality!! 'Tis sad, no?
A painfully heart-wrenching piece. So much truth and sadness
in here. The metaphors, alone are enough to make this write
exquisite, but the sentiment that lies within . . . brilliant.
Excellent job.
~Breezy |
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Re: Idle Muse
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by Whisper on
Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 02:53:10 PM AEST
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Emtional write that.
Whisper |
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