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Although You're There
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 08:21:21 AM in AEST
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Darling although you are there,
I can稚 help it, into oblivion I stare,
As you lay holding me tight,
I gaze at the moon so big and bright.
Wishing upon the glistening stars,
To take me away from here so far,
Away from the hurt and pain I feel,
If only for a peaceful moment I can steal.
A moment of peace is such paradise,
A moment I can rest in and feel nice,
I feel alone even though you池e near,
I still feel dead after you have dried my tear.
I am haunted by things I can not say,
Why my darling can稚 you make then go away?
You swore to protect and to love,
I fear my hand is slipping from your glove.
You promise my heart you would never leave,
That you値l never hurt nor deceive,
But there痴 doubt in the back of my mind,
That one day you値l be cruel and unkind.
That you値l leave me beaten on the floor,
That you値l close the last open door,
That you値l say goodbye and leave me dying,
That you値l never look back on the soul you left crying.
Copyright ﾂｩ
pixie
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2006-06-05 08:21:21]
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Re: Although You're There
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by ever1der on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 09:40:27 AM AEST
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this line: I fear my hand is slipping from your glove. It's really visual and I see a hand coming out of a glove..hauntingly sad pixilator..good work here.
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Re: Although You're There
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 11:29:52 AM AEST
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awww thats so sad dear.... --That you値l leave me beaten on the floor,
That you値l close the last open door,
That you値l say goodbye and leave me dying,
That you値l never look back on the soul you left crying.-- what a strong ending! great great write A++++
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Re: Although You're There
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 02:56:31 PM AEST
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I don't know what they call a female master at something and i ain't about 2 call u mistress lol or mister, seriously, i'll call call somthing more appropriately, i've been reading and enjoying your poetry since i got here since i don't know when, you are the poetry itself, the enbodiment of all the heart has to offer the epetime of poetic perfection
your poetry is inocence and beauty in a realm that could only be describe as another
place and time. such hurt mixed with longing and loving and wisdom. i think i'll have seconds, every thing u write covers every that love is and even sometimes, isn't . **********
(((( pix ))))
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Re: Although You're There
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 09:21:02 PM AEST
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wow Pixie girl you never disapoint me in your writes so much emotions and deep.
Miss reading your poetry.
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Re: Although You're There
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 09:46:04 PM AEST
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Pixie ... you have an uncany way of expressing yourself in a relateable way to nearly every one who reads you. What you feel ... you allow them to feel and relate to, always, regardless of the emotion at the moment. No exception here.
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Re: Although You're There
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by pander on
Thursday, 27th December 2007 @ 01:12:08 PM AEST
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Hello Pixie. Long time no see! I thought you'd left this site so can I say how good it is to see you're back again. And as usual with a brilliant piece of writing.
Lots of luv from your greatest fan,
pander
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