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I think ill end up in the rain

Contributed by rawjer on Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 09:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Darken beside myself
feeling frail
make it now aim to the side
through the cooridors a maze
and it seams to comfort me more than this empty space
I just want a way out
suffacating here in this space
I just want to be me
silenced and pushed aside

If it isnt one thing
its another
and you assure me your my brother
as the shadows fall will this measure bring peace
or at least piece of mind
brought in by another hand
swept away like a pile sand

In a moment
In an instant
wish it would go away
feeling so resistant
straying thoughts moving in the distance
I hear thunder and I smell rain
and I feel your stare poke through my vein
and end up in another sad storey
everything thing you did before me
I think ill end up in the rain
I think ill end up in the rain

...hello...goodbye..something inside
knocking wanting out screaming wont you carry me away
not for long after sadness break you down
and ill be nothing then
I need a complete 360 turn around

breathing for a moment
under the porch where I onced played
seams so distant from my youth
and in my struggle I cant repay
for you youve done to me
so false need to reflect on yourself
maybe its a little far for me to reach
I grab and jump im not close enough
and the wind blows clouds to shadow my sunshine

In a moment
In an instant
wish it would go away
feeling so resistant
straying thoughts moving in the distance
I hear thunder and I smell rain
and I feel your stare poke through my vein
and end up in another sad storey
everything thing you did before me
I think ill end up in the rain
I think ill end up in the rain

the sheperd watches over the flock
not knowing theres a wolf amound the bunch
and its plain to see
not the sheperd but the wolf is me
in a place without power
still not chosing to follow
so you can stay within your sheperds reach
as for me ill stay in the rain

In a moment
In an instant
wish it would go away
feeling so resistant
straying thoughts moving in the distance
I hear thunder and I smell rain
and I feel your stare poke through my vein
and end up in another sad storey
everything thing you did before me
I think ill end up in the rain
I think ill end up in the rain

Copyright © rawjer ... [ 2003-02-07 21:40:00]
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Re: I think ill end up in the rain (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 12:39:40 AM AEST
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very good.....hope to see more of your stuff soon

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