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weak from want
Contributed by
roisin
on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
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your words leave me weak from want
in my dreams
the cravings and hunger intensify
now exposed to the provocative voices
that keep repeating your words
surrendering....surrendering...
totally to the experience
floating upon the seas of pleasures
down into the very depths of my desirous wants
soaring above the rhythmic waves
to an unbelievable height
body arches
arms stretched skyward
head thrown back
a shout of such gratitude - yes, Yes,YES! BRILLIANT!!!
i awake to cat-like stretches, purring
throaty groans mixed with soulful murmurs
a pleasurable hum remains in my head
what sweet dreams you have evoked
i thank you kind sir
another glorious day awaits...
i greet it now with love in my heart
and a
smile on my face.
Copyright ©
roisin
... [
2003-02-07 21:20:00]
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Re: weak from want
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by mckayla on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 09:25:16 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem and I get to be the first to read it!!!
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Re: weak from want
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 09:42:41 PM AEST
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mmm mmm just beautiful rosie! ;o)
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Re: weak from want
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by plous on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 10:00:50 PM AEST
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| its paints very nice, i like it alot. |
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Re: weak from want
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by karoody on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 12:51:37 AM AEST
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very good i lke it
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Re: weak from want
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by Dani on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 08:44:22 AM AEST
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| nice!! |
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Re: weak from want
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 09:49:32 AM AEST
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| excellent... the imagery and underlying tones of this poem have me craving more... wonderful poem! |
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Re: weak from want
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by Merry on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 06:10:39 PM AEST
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ohhh nice one - i love when that happens -
merry |
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