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If I can't be with you...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 12:53:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I wander through darkened times
Unsure of where to go
I try so hard to just push on
I can’t make it this I know
I remember our times of joy
The happiness we shared
I remember times of love
And knowing that you cared
And now I wonder how it is
I wonder what you think
I wonder where your heart lies
And if you notice how mine sinks…
Every time I try again
You slip just out my grasp…
You seem to love me for awhile
But it never seems to last
I know you found new happiness
You’ve made this clear to me
But if he’s what you really want
That what I’ve yet to see…
And as I linger on in life
Alone and miserable
I wonder if you notice
And if it even shows…
You tell me that you love me
And I see you caring still
But it’s not quite how it was
It seems against your will
You spend your days in his arms
You spend your time with him
You spend your love to see him smile
I spend the night alone again…
I’m trying hard to understand
Yet I still don’t see an answer
It’s eating at my will to live
Destroying like a cancer
I can’t press on through all of this
I’m giving up on life
I can’t take this misery
I’m so tired of this strife
I’m sorry for the pain I’ve caused
I hope you see I’m trying…
To put an end to all of it
That’s my reason for dying
And all I know I’ll take with me
To bury in my grave…
Just turn around and walk away
There’s nothing here to save…
I love you dear with all my heart
I hope you know this much is true
But I won’t continue on in life
If I can’t be with you…
Copyright ©
holderofthestone
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2006-06-04 12:53:30]
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Re: If I can't be with you...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 01:06:32 PM AEST
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| She will always love you and don't give up on her. He may not be who she wants to be with and she needs to be sure of that. Don't give up........ |
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Re: If I can't be with you...
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 02:17:26 PM AEST
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Never give up...remember, it is always darkest before the dawn..
Beside, no one is worth taking your life for....
Good write..Jenni |
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Re: If I can't be with you...
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by Alison on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 05:06:35 PM AEST
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| a cry from your heart. very moving. but you must find yourself and be happy with or without the one you love... |
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Re: If I can't be with you...
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by DarkFaerie on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 06:00:56 PM AEST
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| Wow so many emotions tied into one write. Fantastic job. :D |
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Re: If I can't be with you...
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by Lilbabe on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 07:28:13 PM AEST
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so sad...powerful. there's a lot of emotion put into this.
~lexy~ |
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Re: If I can't be with you...
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by brew on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 08:46:50 PM AEST
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CHRIS...................This is one YOU choose to spend enternity with.......what ever HAs happened, throught the blessed paths.,,,need to be forgotten, and let grow into something better.! I know its been painful........So DONT.and I mean it.DONT give up. You have fought, so now fight ever harder.,! Come on......You have friends, who knows.! If YOU need to talk message me......I will listen.
HUGS,,,,
Brew~ |
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Re: If I can't be with you...
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by xxTiaxx on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 02:51:00 PM AEST
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"Love is a fire.
But whether it is going to warm your heart or burn down your house,
you can never tell."
~Joan Crawford~ |
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