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COMES OUT IN THE END
Contributed by
BEE
on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 11:54:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Comes out in the end
I tryed hard to show you these things
The things that i had to give
But it was hard for us
Hard for us both to comprehend
But its like we both still come out on top
The tears that have rushed my eyes
Still show the love between us
And everything that i have said i have ment
Your beautiful
And i just want to let you know
Anything that i can do i will do
Its just like we where ment for eachother
Going threw these rough times
Still come out all fine
Its like when we seperate
It brings us closer in the end
Closer to the begining
Like the bright diamonds
As i look into your beautiful eyes
it Changes the way i think
And how the world spins
All in differnt ways
Its like you make me think
About us and how we waste are time
Waste are time yelling and screaming
When we can have the best
The best life together
Without no control of anyone else
But no matter what we do
Everything is fine
We still glow like heat rays
But we still come out fine in the end
BY BRANDEN GOODRICH
Copyright ©
BEE
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2006-06-03 23:54:56]
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Re: COMES OUT IN THE END
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 12:21:51 AM AEST
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| Deep. Very well done. |
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Re: COMES OUT IN THE END
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by SIMMI on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 03:45:21 PM AEST
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dats deep
i like da ending "We still glow like heat rays
But we still come out fine in the end"
i like it alot |
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Re: COMES OUT IN THE END
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 05:26:44 AM AEST
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a very deep and powerful write.. alot of truth in this.. I like how the ending is happy and its true no matter what happens you over come it in the end.. great expression and truth in this piece
vampyress Jenni |
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