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Growing Pains
Contributed by
DarkFaerie
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Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 01:54:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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when i was a child
happiness prevailed
life was easy
now as ive grown
things grow dark
harder to understand
waters grow deep
murky under my feet
sometimes its death
quicksand pulling
my life swirling away
colder with each step
so now i sprial
so out of control
hoping the wind
will carry me
from the sinking
that is now in control
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DarkFaerie
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2006-06-03 13:54:27]
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Re: Growing Pains
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 02:04:08 PM AEST
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| oh i know this feeling oh so well... that feeling of sinjing ever deeper everyday afraid you'll never get your footing and pull yourself back out.... great write. dont lose hope :) |
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Re: Growing Pains
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 08:23:12 PM AEST
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I like the tittle u know those 2 words can be applied 2 so many situations, that's a scary line " Quicksand pulling my life away " you've done well here your words realy make an impression on the heart. Great work u do.
Ben |
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