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Today (My new life starts
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 01:06:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My life has been full of ups and downs,
A place for idiots, fools and clowns,
A place of grief , and also dread,
Its time to put these things to bed,
So what now, you may think,
Has the girl gone mad, or on the brink,
"No" she replys, I have finally awoken,
From an endless sleep, that should be broken,
Its time for me to take stock,
And open the door that was locked,
To start again , and start to be,
The person that I know is me,
To be sociable, and go out again,
To start afresh , yes! and make new friends,
Too long have I been on my own,.
Stuck inside my little home,
Scared by the past and all its woes,
Frightened away by unseen foes,
A shadow of herself it seems,
Whose only escape was in her dreams,
So now I grasp life with both hands,
And know that others will understand,
Life is too short to hide away,
So thats why my new life will start today
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jerseysue
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2006-06-03 13:06:21]
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Re: Today (My new life starts
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 01:27:01 PM AEST
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The therapy of personal covenants in poetry is a way I've often avoided "professional" therapists! It's really great to capture past perceptions reviewed and remolded to the now. Ya done it here, sue! Great write!
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Re: Today (My new life starts
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 03:01:14 PM AEST
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Sue, I think you expressed yourself with perfection in this.
-and I know there are many who would relate.
Nice rhyme and flow. And what a message!!
Awesome post, hun!
~Breezy
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