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Prize
Contributed by
Sordida
on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 02:53:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Do you feel you’ve won
The game of love?
You won me.
I’m the prize that you give away.
I’m the broken toy
That you get at the fair
So you don’t feel
Like you lost.
But you did.
I am your conciliation prize
And you may return me
If you feel you should
Copyright ©
Sordida
... [
2006-06-03 02:53:06] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Prize
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lady_Daisy on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 07:14:53 AM AEST (User
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Somewhat primitive you need to develop this. You also need to add some punctuation and perhaps some imagery. |
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