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Remembering the years we've shared...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 10:26:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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So lost and so alone
I linger on through life
Drowning in an ocean
Swimming in my strife
Not knowing where to turn
Confused on where to go
I try so hard everyday
To just not let it show
Yet I’m dying on the inside
I can barely stop the tears
I know I can’t control the pain
If I can’t fend off these fears
They overwhelm and conquer
They break me and destroy
I try to fool those around
My happiness in just a ploy
But I know it all shows through
I don’t even smile anymore
Everything has lost its luster
Life’s not like it was before
I never thought we’d be apart
Or that you’d leave me behind
I thought if you weren’t happy
You would’ve given me a sign
I figured that what we had
Would make it through whatever
I guess I believed too much
I thought forever meant forever…
I still cry for you at night
I still reach out for your skin
Yet I grasp only emptiness
Resting where you once had been
I miss the days of smiles
We used to laugh and dream
Now I struggle in a world
Where nothings as it seems
The day fades into night
In such a simple way
I lie awake and think of you
Til night fades back day…
Time keeps on dragging me
Through these fields of sorrow
Making me lie in fear
Dreading what comes tomorrow
I need to know your love again
I need you to save my soul
I’m here alone without you
I’m slowly losing control
I can’t take another day…
Living in this pain…
You help me make sense of things
You help to keep me sane…
The past we shared so long ago
To me still means so much
I remember the love we had
I still tingle from your touch…
Find it in deep inside of you...
You know what your heart desires
Remember the love we once shared
How it once set our souls on fire…
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holderofthestone
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2006-06-02 22:26:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Remembering the years we've shared...
(User Rating: 1 ) by chaos78 on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 11:30:14 PM AEST (User
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this is so beautifully write i truely enjoy reading it thanks |
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Re: Remembering the years we've shared...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 10:46:52 AM AEST (User
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This is a sad but meaningful write. Thanks for sharing this. |
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Re: Remembering the years we've shared...
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 10:54:44 AM AEST (User
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Awww man, this so sad. Wonderfully written. Loved the rhyming. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Remembering the years we've shared...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 11:10:45 AM AEST (User
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I don't know who this is about but whoever it is they didn't forget and maybe they are just lost and confused. Help them find their way back to you...... |
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Re: Remembering the years we've shared...
(User Rating: 1 ) by DarkFaerie on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 12:33:41 PM AEST (User
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i know who this about and im sure she didnt forget. the spark still burns in her heart. be strong.
I still cry for you at night
I still reach out for your skin
Yet I grasp only emptiness
Resting where you once had been
beautiful words. 5 stars. :) |
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Re: Remembering the years we've shared...
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 11:24:53 PM AEST (User
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nicely done...i can relate.
wiz |
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