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going the wrong way
Contributed by
marly
on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 08:13:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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She sold her soul to the streets
begging for forgiveness to anyone she meets
Why should they,
it was my choice to lose my existence
I lost my voice
I can't even cry to save my soul
I'm all by myself
this heart is now cold
I am the most selfish person to turn my head away
Show me how to love
cause I don't know what to say
I don't want to see you dying because of what I've done
It's my life
I've always had to run
you want me to fix the past i've seen
then help me with a shoulder to lean
I don't know how to say it,
though so easy to say
I need help
i'm in denial
I'm going the wrong way
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marly
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2006-06-02 20:13:48]
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Re: going the wrong way
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 09:42:35 PM AEST
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I can't even cry to save my soul
I'm all by myself
this heart is now cold-- i love the pain in these lines... i feel the same way right now. great write A+++ |
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Re: going the wrong way
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by chaos78 on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 10:53:26 PM AEST
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| i can feel your pain in this this is a great write |
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Re: going the wrong way
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 01:48:55 AM AEST
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this is really good. i can seriously relate to this.
good write. |
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Re: going the wrong way
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by bronzen on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 09:28:48 PM AEST
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| EMOTIONAL POEM |
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