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life is blessed
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 04:37:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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this is a farsided view a small neglect
with blured thought a distant defect
a sign in the stars out in the city sky
with lights so polluted we cant see that high
fallen abyss a hollow scream in the dark
watching disrespect in a group at the park
tongue tied and troubled mangled in wreak
rolling the dice life is a bruised up trek
waiting for money thats as bad as it comes
seeing the moon red when judgement is done
danger slides like a serpent in grass
a ticking time bomb without change things wont last
longing for peaceful revelotion that mysterious hill
but trying to stop war when people have no will
now wake up and come see your mess
do you really belive life is so blessed
fashion spent the funds have died
the rich get fat and the homeless hide
but the sun shines on us all
why do we create so many walls
no trespass private and all secluded
words on signs these days all but polluted
call of the young time to change goals
im sure we can change the fate of the polls
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Re: life is blessed
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 07:58:21 PM AEST (User
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Good ideas written here, Relic. You paint a vivid picture of your world with your words. Peace to ya bro, Laura |
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