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Cetus
Contributed by
R0b
on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 01:10:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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How deep have you gone?
Dig down to the roots.
Maybe the answer isn’t high, but low.
You may fear what you walk upon.
I know you know.
You just can’t bring yourself to see that.
Dive beneath the oceans.
To the very heat of darkness.
Nothing?
Search the lands.
But don’t fear the lion’s den.
For it lay dormant.
But how sure are we?
Can you tell?
Look into its eyes.
Can you even do that?
Remember do not fear what you already know.
When you look.
What do you see?
Is it what you expected?
Or can you not answer that.
There are many questions, with no answers.
You know that.
Timing is key to everything.
Most things fall into place.
Causing a chain reaction.
Cause and effect.
What’s caused this to have the effects?
Is it in our control, or above it…
6/2/06
R0b
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R0b
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2006-06-02 13:10:44]
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Re: Cetus
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 11:15:26 AM AEST
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hey BABE!!!! omg I love you!! Well anyways this was a good poem.. I liked the way that you wrote it and it had a good flow.. I only wish I could write poetry that doesn't rhyme.. .When I do they completely suck!! but oh well.. I am sorry that not alot to no one comments on your poems.. It's a shame because you do write some pretty good poems... well anyways since you are RUSHING me on my comment.. I guess i am done.. great poem..
I love you LOTS!!!
i am so happy that you are back!!
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Re: Cetus
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by jaa0726 on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 11:05:18 AM AEST
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| heyy awsome poem all your poems rock... |
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