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For Some Odd Reason
Contributed by
lonely_boy
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Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 11:06:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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when the sun goes down
and the night engulfs the world
i will be sitting here
screaming for this girl
she makes me wonder
why i'm even still alive
like i'm ***** nothing
and i should go ahead and die
though for some odd reason
i'm still breathing today
with the pain that never eases
and her image that doesn't fade
so maybe this is a sign
that i should follow
because for some reason
i don't feel the sorrow
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lonely_boy
... [
2006-06-02 11:06:15]
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Re: For Some Odd Reason
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by girltranscended on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 01:49:01 PM AEST
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I like that you have 8 lines of feeling like you're nothing and then 8 lines of moving on. Although I wonder what you mean by follow.
It's good to wonder. Nice job. |
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Re: For Some Odd Reason
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by GemmaLouiseRose on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 07:54:48 PM AEST
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| it reads so well.. i really feel what ur portraying, its so sad and excellent x |
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