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Ray Combs
Contributed by
randyjohnson
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Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 07:37:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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You committed suicide ten years ago today.
I'm sorry that you had to pay.
You were fired from Family Feud and that must have hurt a lot.
I wish you could've went on but sadly you could not.
I wish you hadn't committed suicide.
It hurt all of America when you died.
You deserved better than what happened to you.
We regret the pain you went through.
When you were on the Feud, you were a great host.
Your friends and family miss you the most.
You were once a very big star.
You died young but you still went far.
Copyright ©
randyjohnson
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2006-06-02 07:37:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Ray Combs
(User Rating: 1 ) by TFretornotTFret on
Thursday, 15th May 2008 @ 05:15:54 AM AEST (User
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I definitely felt your sense of loss. It might get more kudos though if you tried less to rhyme and more to paint pictures of the feelings it gives you? Only a suggestion, though keeeeeep writing! |
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Re: Ray Combs
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 09:50:00 AM AEST (User
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This was a very heartfelt tribute. Very well done! |
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