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My Comfort Zone
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 01:06:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My comfort zone is my place,
Far away from the human race,
A little haven just for me,
To contemplate my thoughts you see,
I am happy here, for it is tranquil,
And for that I must be thankful,
For when I am here no one can see,
The problems that are bothering me,
Life outside these walls I find,
Are full of things so unkind,
You could only understand,
If inside my mind you stand,
In silent times when I am low,
And tears fall like a rivers flow,
No one is there to hold my hand,
Lost and alone in a barren land,
If I am honest , I want to break free,
And be the person I want to be,
So I will weather the storm you see,
And once again I will be me,
Free in spirit, free in mind,
Happy to seek and to find,
Not hiding , but showing my face,
Back home again in the human race,
Copyright ©
jerseysue
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Re: My Comfort Zone
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 01:44:48 PM AEST
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| Very ceative write. I have those feelings also...Mike |
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Re: My Comfort Zone
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by richcol7522 on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 04:26:15 PM AEST
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My hiding place is alot like yours....I like the way tat you wrote it very good job...keep upi the good work.
Rich
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Re: My Comfort Zone
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by EddieDean on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 05:06:34 PM AEST
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My little hidey-hole is my imagination, when the world gets too much to bear, I just let my mind wonder and just phase out. Nice write, keep it up.
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Re: My Comfort Zone
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by wizard on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 08:30:27 PM AEST
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i've often searched for such a place...still looking!
this is an escellent write...nicely done!
wiz |
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Re: My Comfort Zone
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by Bruce on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 05:28:44 AM AEST
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| just lovely and so meaningful |
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Re: My Comfort Zone
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by Spike on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 06:28:36 AM AEST
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A tidy and honest poem about our special place- which can be as much a state of mind as an actual place. Thanks for posting.
Spike |
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