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Puppy Love Attack
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 07:38:11 AM in AEST
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Her heart was sorely broken
Not a kind word had been spoken
She wandered the path aimlessly
Not caring what she may see
Then off to the left she heard a yelp
She looked that way, could she help?
In the grass that stood tall
She found a puppy so very small
Its eyes were barely open a slit
She looked farther a bit
There she saw the mother dog
Laying near an aged log
Seems someone had taken her life
Out of her side a large butcher knife
Also three other puppies were there
Their little eyes in deaths blank stare
She cried for the loss of life
And the pain and strife
She picked up the little nipper
Cradling him, he could sleep in her slipper
Nursing this dog gave her life meaning
Love from her heart came streaming
As he grew he gave back so very much
She found she looked forward to his paws touch
Her heart given to one so small
Helped her over the mountain once and for all
No longer did she worry what others thought
She knew that love could not be bought
She had found what true love was that day
And in her heart it would always stay
She gave to another but received so much back
She could not wait for another puppy love attack
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NoSaint
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2006-06-01 07:38:11]
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Re: Puppy Love Attack
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by jujubee21 on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 08:30:57 AM AEST
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This is a very nice poem
animals can show you so much love
great writing |
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Re: Puppy Love Attack
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 11:11:41 AM AEST
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oh Shari,
this was a true "tear jerker!" What a delightful story. You write such touching poetry. Your heart is on your sleeve when you write, I can feel all your emotions, and you are such a wonderful poetress!!!
I could just see this scene, 'cause I used to take the strays in too!
Is there anything more fun, and touching than a little stray puppy? Haven't found it yet.
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us!
Warm love
consue |
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Re: Puppy Love Attack
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by ButchHoward on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 12:35:46 PM AEST
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Such a sweetly sad and yet, happy poem touches the heart of anyone who loves God's creatures. I can't count the number of dogs I have saved in my life and I'm proud of the fact that I could be there to help them. I love the feeling I get from reading this. Excellent write! *****
Butch |
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Re: Puppy Love Attack
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 01:49:50 PM AEST
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| Shari, what a wonderful way of bringing lifes trageties to a happy ending. The way you told your story could do nothing but pull at the readers heart, as it did mine....Mike |
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Re: Puppy Love Attack
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 07:04:39 AM AEST
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Shari~
I have always loved visiting ur pages. Your magnificient poetry always has depth and true meaning. You write deep from inside ur heart my dear friend. The contents of ur pages are always so impressive.
No longer did she worry what others thought
She knew that love could not be bought
How true these words are. Love can never ever be bought. Well done Shari~ A gifted and talented poetess who graces our hearts with her magical masterpieces.
love n hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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