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People stopped caring!

Contributed by Elite on Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 05:38:02 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

People stopped caring
People started glaring
Im going away for a while
Leaving the world without my warm smile
Leaving it with bitterness in my heart
How people don’t even care about my part

My part is over, my scene is done
Im retiring away, im cowering away from the sun
A crab moving into his shell
Sure im nothing more to you than an ongoing clanging bell
I was never a main actor in the play
My lines probably didn’t even cause your cold heart to sway

Is there actually life and love in this world?
Or only people who hate it enough to want to hurl?
Don’t say im wrong, because im not
You’ve felt this way, you’ve just wanted to drop
I don’t want to see anyone anymore
I hate people using me and making me feel sore

You don’t care! Don’t say you do because you don’t
Actions speak louder than words, showing them is something you wont!
Yea ill probably lose all my friends, but isn’t that why im writing this poem?
To show that they’re probably not really my friends! Im going home.
I want to go back a few years. Change how it all happened
Wishful thinking stops my spirits from being dampened!
I need help, you’ve probably guessed
This why my life is such a mess
No one’s helped me.

Life has failed me, people have failed me, family has failed me, friends have failed me, relationships have failed me – more importantly I’ve failed every single one of them.

Im worthless, just another grain of sand
A life too small to even hold in your hand
One of many with pain
One of many going insane
Im just around for the convenience of everyone else
Living just for their expense
Im not happy about who I am, who I was or who I’ll be
I just live to please everyone else, and im doing a great job at that as you can see!
Yea one person caused most of my problems a long time ago
But other people have come in and added more plot twists to this show

Copyright Â© Elite ... [ 2006-06-01 05:38:02]
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Re: People stopped caring! (User Rating: 1 )
by jujubee21 on Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 08:52:27 AM AEST
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very well written poem
I know everyone feels this way sometimes and you put it into words very well
kept me interested the whole way

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