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(No Title)
Contributed by
CherryCandyCane
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Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 10:23:08 PM in AEST
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Lend me your heart, if even for a short while – and I’ll give you mine,
It’s yours now; do with it as you please,
Lend me a shoulder, or perhaps just an ear,
It’s a fair trade, I just want to be the one you let ease the fear – the one you allow to dry the tears,
Lend me your lips if only to temporarily occupy mine,
Lend me your arms just for the night,
And I shall forever hold you in mine,
Lie to me …
Spin me a beautiful web of deceit and lies,
Simple pleasantries only to appease my soul,
Whisper those oh so sweet nothings in my ear,
Just as I drift off to sleep whisper the most beautiful lie of all,
Say that you love me,
Say there’s no place you’d rather be,
Just stay here with me
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 10:35:41 PM AEST
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very nicley done..you say you are not a poet, but i beg to differ.
great job!
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 04:22:50 PM AEST
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You say you are not a poet, yet I would call this poetry.
I am curious, why is it that you say you are not a poet?
I like this, a lot, and I would say that this was more poetic than many posts I have read are. And I have read a lot of poetry.
Good write, it's good in its simplicity.
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