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Beautiful this way
Contributed by
Inevitable
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Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 10:01:31 PM in AEST
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I know I'm bleeding inside
You think I can't see
the intoxications swelling,
Wrapping themselves around my veins?
He was my lover at the moment
We said and did all the right things
But I'm breaking from the inside out
Bending till my heart gives out.
In a corner my soul spins
They say it's been there for awhile
well I have no breath, I'm losing my mind
Isn't it just beautiful this way?
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Inevitable
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2006-05-31 22:01:31]
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Re: Beautiful this way
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 10:11:38 PM AEST
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I could sense a lot of pain between those words; take care my friend, there is always a better half at the other side of the life it is how we look at it that gives us pain or joy. "life is beautiful any way"
Good work though.
FRANCO
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Re: Beautiful this way
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by Sony_Boat on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 10:12:10 PM AEST
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sad poem, you wrote it very nicely, gj.
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Re: Beautiful this way
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by Davinah on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 02:41:12 AM AEST
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This is so sad and beautiful... Very well done!
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