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suicide note
Contributed by
marly
on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 09:16:55 PM in AEST
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In a way I see the truth that lay
and my pain can't seem to take today
can't seem to go away
and I lie every single way
every single day
my only friend draws my blood
and only takes away
satisfaction in what I can't see
finding that love deep inside of me
This is my soul that I sell to help me get by
so tempting to waste away this lie
How long will I live
everyday I spare
I kill and I kill
to the point where I don't care
I live to disappoint my existence that gave me this life I live
and here I am this soul
with nothing left to give
Take me away
slumber I can't resist
a life with no disappointment
this life I would not miss
Copyright ©
marly
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2006-05-31 21:16:55]
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Re: suicide note
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 09:36:24 PM AEST
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wow...i thought that was great! nicely done.
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Re: suicide note
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by Sony_Boat on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 10:14:56 PM AEST
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excellent write, lots of feelings. gj
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Re: suicide note
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by Davinah on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 02:42:51 AM AEST
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Very beautiful. A lot of deep emotions.
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Re: suicide note
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by Elite on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 07:44:00 AM AEST
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| This poem was very moving...a lot of passion and deep turmoil...great writing. It touches on a lot of things that I have also felt. Nicely done! You've said what I sometimes find hard to say! |
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