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The Feisty Wench
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 06:11:10 PM in AEST
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He was dashing, She was daring,
If he looked at another, she was glaring,
He was faithful, She was cruel,
He never complained, she called him a fool,
He was kind, She was ungrateful,
He gave compliments, She was hateful,
He gave love, She threw it back,
He said white, She said black,
He said marry me , She said no,
He said why?, She said you know,
He got upset, She laughed in his face,
He said I love you,She said get off my case,
He said let us part, She said ok,
He was heartbroken,She left the next day,
He still wants her, She doesn't care,
He called her up, She wasn't there,
He found another love, She was irate,
He loved his new love, She knew it was too late,
He got married, She was left by herself,
He was happy at last,She was left on the shelf.
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Re: The Feisty Wench
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by ButchHoward on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 06:37:42 PM AEST
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Good story and poem, Sue. I guess it's human nature to want something only after it's gone.
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Re: The Feisty Wench
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 10:01:29 PM AEST
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nicely done...there is a nice message in here...i wish i had read this a few years ago.
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Re: The Feisty Wench
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 11:20:53 PM AEST
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Oooooh I love a feisty wench!
sounds like every woman I've ever lived with!
or maybe it's me that's got the problem!??
good write gave me a huge smile this one.
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Re: The Feisty Wench
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 11:40:03 PM AEST
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I have to agree with Jarred... Nicely done.
Thanks for the smiles, Sue.... and the lesson in this...
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