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Will you be my Valentine?
Contributed by
Ivy
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Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
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From very long time,
I had this in my mind.
But didn't know how to ask,
Will you be my valentine?
Now the day has come so near,
So, Iam asking you my dear.
With loads of doubt and fear,
Will you be my valentine?
We have been so close friends for long,
I don't want anything to go wrong.
We have been singing this friendly song,
For years from dusk to dawn.
The day has come that is so grand,
That has flowers and gifts in everyones hand.
I hope you won't break my heart with a bang,
When I ask you, Will you be my Valentine?
Copyright ©
Ivy
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2003-02-07 10:30:00]
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Re: Will you be my Valentine?
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by Sexygirl on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 11:16:26 AM AEST
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| I hope the answer was yes....I like this one..well written... |
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Re: Will you be my Valentine?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 11:40:56 AM AEST
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You'd better tell me who the lucky guy is?
By the way that was a very good poem.Keep up the good work.
Damien. |
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Re: Will you be my Valentine?
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by wangela on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 11:44:24 AM AEST
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I also hope the answer was ( YES!I"D LOVE TO) . Ivy I was just searching for poets from India on this wonderful site when I came across your name. Then I started reading your poems and boy- do you write well or what? I am planning on visiting your wonderful country in a month or two , before that I decided to find out as much as I can about the culture there and the places to visit. I believe poets are more sensitive and caring and helpful than any other's. It would be great if you could mail me back and let me know where you live in India(not the exact street address) but the city and the interesting places to be visited around there. Also by reading your poems I have come to the conclusion that you would definetly be a very interesting person to strike a friendship with. Waiting for your mail.
Wangela
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Re: Will you be my Valentine?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 04:55:07 AM AEST
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ivy
i know its too late to coment
but valentine day left
still some one looking for valentine for next valentine
sure the day might come for any one in once
a life
good one keep making new once
good luck
rAm |
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