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Indebted
Contributed by
ButchCorpuz
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Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 03:46:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There were times when I want to give up
Thinking that this pain would never stop
Those times when I don’t know what to do
Right by my side, there was always you
Always there to lend me a shoulder
To cry on each time life gets harder
You’re there to support, to understand
Ready to give me a helping hand
Each night when I do nothing but weep
You wipe my tears ‘till I fall asleep
Making sure that I see the next day
Keeping all of my nightmares away
I can never be grateful enough
For your presence each time love gets tough
For you, there’s nothing I wouldn’t do
I’d spend my entire life thanking you
For everything that you’ve done for me
For all the times you’ve made me happy
I thank you for your love, for your care
I thank you for simply being there
For catching me every time I fall
For helping me stand straight and tall
For easing my pain when I lose control
I thank you with all my heart and soul
If I get to live this life once more
There is nothing else I would ask for
I’d gladly live life with you again
You, who brings me closer to heaven
So I wrote this poem to let you know
That never again will I let you go
In my heart, you have a place buried deep
You’re in my heart, and I’m yours to keep
-Butch
-Betrayer of Hope
Copyright ©
ButchCorpuz
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2006-05-31 15:46:58]
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Re: Indebted
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by Sony_Boat on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 08:55:59 PM AEST
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1 word: beautiful
I would definately send this poem to Ms. Jenna Paola Alvarez, a very touching poem.
5 stars from me, wish I could give a zillion more.
Sony
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Re: Indebted
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 10:28:32 AM AEST
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Again another beautiful BEAUTIFUL poem.. This was amazing.. I could feel the love that you have for her through the words that you have woven into this poem.. This was a very beautiful poem butch..
Take care
christina |
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