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The Loneliness
Contributed by
lonely_boy
on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 01:51:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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the loneliness it hurts
when i can't hold you near
the nights are longer
and i am full of fear
where are you
when i need you most
even in my dreams
you are just a ghost
just an image
is all that you left me
not even a tiny note
explaining what i did to make you leave
so i sit here
waiting for your return
but this heart in my chest
this loneliness it burns
too stubburn to let go
of this love i never felt
you left for some reason
by your bed i knelt
i pray for god
to bring you back home
3 weeks gone by
and i'm still alone
in this life
i'm constantly depressed
continually tortured
by the loneliness
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lonely_boy
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2006-05-31 01:51:46]
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Re: The Loneliness
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by Ruby2sdy on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 02:07:52 AM AEST
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ah, so tragic! a lovely poem though! nice write.
2sdyx |
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Re: The Loneliness
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by Davinah on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 09:06:16 AM AEST
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| That's so sad... I hope she'll return. |
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Re: The Loneliness
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by welcomehome on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 03:17:32 PM AEST
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| oh that's sad..i'm sorry |
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Re: The Loneliness
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by GemmaLouiseRose on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 07:58:50 PM AEST
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again, the delivery of ur emotions is fantastic.
Read mine entitled the dead lovers elegy
you may like it xx |
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