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My Soldier
Contributed by
Lo2681
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Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 04:23:08 PM in AEST
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Patriotic
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In the unforgiving trenches,
Clenched to nothing but his gun,
Protect him please dear Lord,
This soldier is too young.
He is fighting for all he knows,
Serving his country the best he can,
But Lord please be with him always,
Answer his prays that come from wounded hands.
Some say war is not the answer,
While some say it's the only way,
But Lord I could care less what is or isn't,
Just let this soldier see another day.
If something happens,
And he should be taken,
It wont be the first I’ve seen,
But please dear Lord don’t let that happen,
For this soldier is close to me.
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Lo2681
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Re: My Soldier
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 05:13:57 PM AEST
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Such an element of sadness in this hun, but beautiful in
all it's telling. Thanks for sharing.
Praying for you and your soldier~
~Breezy |
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Re: My Soldier
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 06:27:00 PM AEST
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i hope he makes it back safely...excellent post!!
wiz |
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Re: My Soldier
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by Ruby2sdy on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 01:31:27 AM AEST
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My cousin's out in Iraq, so I kind of understand what you're going through, it's tough having someone out there, good luck to both of you,
2sdyx |
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Re: My Soldier
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 04:54:26 AM AEST
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Lo~
My heart and prayers are with u always dear friend. I felt ur pain, ur sadness and ur longing to have ur soldier back in ur arms where he belongs. Not somewhere else fighting someone elses war. May God bring ur soldier back home safe and sound real soon. A sad, but very well ascribed piece of poetry that touches the heart. Well done Lo~ Keep up the great work.
love, hugs n prayers always,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: My Soldier
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 05:42:24 AM AEST
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| Hope and pray he comes back safe, brilliant write. xxx |
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