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Shirty
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 03:40:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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Take off your shirt, and give me your soul; it won’t hurt.
Close your eyes and let this inescapable bliss rip you apart.
Wouldn’t ask something of you, if I didn’t think you could give,
If I didn’t think it would live, forever in my heart.
Just unfasten your belt and give me your world; and let tonight be the start,
Of something beautiful, something wonderful, something as real as the flesh,
The flesh we bite, the flesh we soothe, all ours.
Tangle the sheets and taste my desire,
Burning stronger than the brightest fire,
I’ll kneel at your altar and pray, pray for you to take my pain away,
You’re beautiful, you’re wonderful, you’re as real as the flesh,
The flesh I bite, the flesh I soothe, all mine.
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Ruby2sdy
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2006-05-30 15:40:20]
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Re: Shirty
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by Lo2681 on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 03:54:05 PM AEST
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Wow! I really like this. "I'll kneel at your alter...." very deep! I am at a loss for words about this one. Excellent job.
~Lo |
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Re: Shirty
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 04:01:08 PM AEST
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| Oh I find this true lustful desire. Not in a bad way, truly overtaken by the truthfulness. It was a good read. Sue x |
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