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Serenity's smile
Contributed by
Mim
on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 10:17:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Serenity's smile ripens on her face
Clear
As the eddies and currents of my mind
Envy
The stillness of the water of her eyes
Undisturbed
By the rain that never hits the ground.
Never draws the mushrooms of mud
Silky
From the bottom of thoughtful puddles
Deep
But reflects the light back to the world
Smiles
Ripen on her face
Clear.
Copyright ©
Mim
... [
2006-05-30 10:17:16]
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Re: Serenity's smile
(User Rating: 1 )
by R0b on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 11:31:25 AM AEST
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| Hey, I really like your style of writing. This poem had me reading it again and again. I really like this one. :) |
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Re: Serenity's smile
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by djdarkrose04 on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 03:29:24 PM AEST
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| I love the imagery in this poem. I haven't seen writing like this before. Great job! |
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