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Those that have seen
Contributed by
nothingness
on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 08:52:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Stop pretending life is so great
We all know life is pain and hate
There will never be a happy end
Our cuts and wounds will never mend
Scares are left so we can never forget
All of out mistakes and all of our regret
A world full of liars and no one to care
No one to see what is actually there
No one is there to show what is real
Only know that darkness is all we will ever feel
But its not so bad if its always been that way
No one could know that life wasn’t always gray
But what about those that have seen the light
That seen the day and fell back in to the endless night
How do you go on knowing everyone has lied?
What do you do when the only answer is suicide?
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2006-05-30 08:52:02]
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Re: Those that have seen
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 09:24:50 AM AEST
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well first off, the answer is never suicide, as long as it might have taken me to figure that out.....basically if at one point things were fine then one day the will be again. but good write, the pain described well.
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Re: Those that have seen
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by coolkid7098 on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 10:43:41 AM AEST
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| Very descriptive. Sometimes the pain is just to great to overcome. They say that time heals all wounds but time just turns them into scars that weigh on your heart. Very nicely written. |
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