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DUST
Contributed by
remi
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Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 08:26:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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DUST
To: J. 2 a man I never
Taught would hurt me more then my
Father
Dec 10, 05
8:39 am
My soul has turn into dust
My heart no longer pumps life, love, feeling into my veins
Vampire around me are disguise as friends pretending 2 care while they sink their teeth into my neck
My life has turn into a maze and only they know where the exit are cause I’m 2 lost myself to leave
And yet after every painful encounter I let them do it again I give my neck arm where’ve they can find a vein
I’m their sick pleasure I’m the reason they are happy they are evil and I make easy prey
Maybe a part of me wants. Them to end it for good, but I know they never will. I’m their favorite meal of the day
The weak and lost looking for life and love
Remy
Copyright ©
remi
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2006-05-30 08:26:08]
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Re: DUST
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by spazz911 on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 09:05:10 AM AEST
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full of hurt and anguish, it was a good write apart from grammar errors, like i should talk there, but i relate so well to the emotion behind it
great job
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Re: DUST
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 02:46:39 PM AEST
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Thanks for sharing. Keep on writing it helps release those emotions.
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