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behind this face
Contributed by
darkness_angel
on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 02:37:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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behind the smiles
behind the eyes
behind the face
is where she dies
her lifes been ripped away
so this innocent girl
wont live to see another day
you don't know who she is
you have no idea
all the pain she lives with
and all the secret fear
secretly locked away
deep down inside
you were never there
so in you she couldn't confide
but tonights the night
tonights the tradgic end
of this poor little girl
you couldnt even befriend
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2006-05-30 02:37:40]
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Re: behind this face
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 02:46:29 AM AEST
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Sad but well written. Hope you feel better soon and that this is just writng.
Huggs,
emy |
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Re: behind this face
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by spider on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 06:57:57 AM AEST
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favourite bit:
'behind the smiles
behind the eyes
behind the face
is where she dies'
what a great start, kick ass poem.
sad that you have to feel like you do to write like this but still.....really great write, |
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Re: behind this face
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by Remi on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 08:33:44 AM AEST
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| very sad but is a very loverly write |
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Re: behind this face
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 09:37:11 AM AEST
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heart wrenching....but a wonderful write, sad, but wonderful.
~natalya |
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