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why daddy why?
Contributed by
jmakuer
on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 12:02:15 AM in AEST
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as I sit up all night
tears rolling down my eyes
cant sleep, cant stop I gotta cry
its not right, its awful, so hideous
I cant live no more I rather die
it was inhuman it was just insane
I just dont get it, why why why,
how can a father do something like this?
to his own child, what a ***** pig
its mid night and I only wanted to say good night
walked out to kiss him on my nigh ties thinking I would be aight
here we are a hand down my pants and a friend help too
I scream out loud hoping it will make all go right
the evil cared less and kept on quite alright
he did all wrong for so long, the I was hopeless;
I struggle so much I was so restless
he repeatedly raped me each and every night
I begged and begged for mercy and to be left alone
but what else can I do when everything I had is all gone
I lost my virginity to my own father and friends
its another night for him to come by and do it again
not only just him, he invited his friends
am so sacre I was so hurt I was in pain,
blood sobbing down my legs hoping he
will realize it and bring it all to an end
but the evil in him kept pushing for more
slapping me around and calling me a whore
why why why why why daddy why ?
you made me do it and you kept asking for more
I pleaded again and again and said I love you
he blind folded me and put me in the trunk
he was so fearful thinking he might get *****
if the I open my mouth, and tell them cops
here they are heading for the woods
took me out and had their last
pleading over and over again please please
tearlessly I cy out hoping it would help
I went on again and pleaded. please daddy please daddy
daddy please stop, I love you I love you, you are my best
he went back into the car and reached in for the bat
I scream and scream and told him I wont say a thing
please daddy I wont I swear I wont daddy please I wont do a thing
powerlessly I try to fight back but it was not a thing
suddenly I stop breathing, not saying a thing
and daddy is now off of me yelling, and smiling, and said
thats what you get ***** for being a whore
here i am, am dead.
if you are against rape and child abuse please copy and repost it on myspace buleting board thank you for the supprot. for the men you can ***** off my blog page now cause thats not really fare
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Re: why daddy why?
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 12:18:33 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
I don't hate men but was molested by an uncle as a child. I know how it devastates tho and a person will never forget it.
Keep up the great writing.
I see u r milatary in Irac.
God bless you and keep you safe in his arms.
Thank you for what you do in the milatary etc.
luv, huggs, prayer,
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Re: why daddy why?
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 01:02:54 AM AEST
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This isn't men, this is insane and twisted that is to blame here. There's really no connection between the author's note and the piece, and it's straining the limits of a family website, that's for certain.
I agree with this completely, don't get me wrong, but I'm not liking its presentation. There are plenty of honorable men out there, of which I try very hard to be one.
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Re: why daddy why?
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by Davinah on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 04:10:56 AM AEST
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| Very intense write... I would be careful generalizing though... Not all men are demons and not all women are angels. |
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Re: why daddy why?
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by vitamin_joe on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 09:29:41 AM AEST
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I am with Andrew. I am not really sure I like this one, and yr comments before and after are full of hate.
on the level of poetry, this starts out as if it is true, but then at the end I realised it was a fiction, as you couldn't be writing it and and be dead. I felt a bit cheated by that, somehow.
technically, lots of typos and grammar problems.
I think the subject needs addressing tho, so well done for having a go. I am not sure you will get far saying things like "men are the hideous thing/people god ever made" though. that's just not true- it's yr opinion. I am sorry you feel that way.
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Re: why daddy why?
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by Remi on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 09:33:26 AM AEST
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very raw and emotoinal write great job
i would love for all my friends to read this and i will show it to them if you don't mine |
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