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The Drive
Contributed by
Smartie
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Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 10:57:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I gained the weight
We could be more Joyful
Each day, he grew inside.
The weeks had past,
He slowly grew more,
Everytime, my smile got bigger
The months passed by
He was almost ready,
Expecting him to come.
You kissed me good-bye
As you headed for work
I watched you drive away
Then it happened
That knock on the door
Telling me I would see you no more
They said it crashed
Thay said he was druck
They said he died too
Now our Child
Almost two
Knowing nothing of you
Its beacuse he was drunk
Its beacuse he drove
I hope he also didd't have someone he loved
My wish for the world
If you have any scence at all
please don't Drink and Drive
You can same someone's life
But all I ask
Is you don't drink and drive.
Copyright ©
Smartie
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2006-05-29 22:57:21]
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Re: The Drive
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 11:20:04 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
I'm so sorry for your lose.
huggs,
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Re: The Drive
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by Smartie on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 05:17:18 PM AEST
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Hey guys, just to be Clear, I'm only 14, I and have never lost someone to drunk driving, I just hear about it in the news, and I pick a point a veiw that will make lots of impact.
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