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Untittled
Contributed by
Panther
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Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 09:47:22 PM in AEST
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No matter what happens today
I know your love is okay
The love you have shown me
Shows me everything I could't see
Daddy you have given me a lift
I really could't see it as a gift
Everyday i use to hide
Like you somehow died
But now I can finally see the pain
I have caused you and i am going insane
I wish you could finally see
That I can now be "me"
Copyright ©
Panther
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2006-05-29 21:47:22]
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Re: Untittled
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 10:04:31 PM AEST
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A bit sad but great writing.
We gotta be ourselves as I see it as the only way.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Untittled
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by Sony_Boat on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 10:23:26 PM AEST
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| its wonderful you can see it now, that love he shared with you. keep loving, you will be ok, just be you. |
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Re: Untittled
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by Panther on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 08:31:23 PM AEST
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| I am a sober person and I really did not mean to make it sound like he died. I just want him to know that i am now clean and sober for the first time in my life. |
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Re: Untittled
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by Arijadna77 on
Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 08:22:39 PM AEST
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I wish you could finally see
That I can now be "me"
It says everything...in few words,u made a point...Its honesty breathes...from here:)) |
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