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THE SOUNDS OF LOVE
Contributed by
MarLites
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Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 03:46:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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THE SOUNDS OF LOVE
Can you hear them
They are everywhere
Open your heart
Listen
The morning chirps
Of the little sparrow
Welcoming the day
The gentle breeze blowing
The chimes
That tinkle form the eves
The gentle purring
Of the soft kitten
Curled in the
Palm of your hand
The oceans waves that
Pound the shore
With a cresting
Crash
The thundering sound
Of the jet fighters
In perfect
Formation flying overhead
The midnight train
Who’s whistle blows
Long and low
The collective aaahhhs
The crowd releases
As the fireworks
Explode their
Vibrant colors
The silence of the perfect
Summer night
Broken by the love
Call of the
Lonesome cricket
Listen
Can you hear them
They are all around
The sounds of
Love
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MarLites
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Re: THE SOUNDS OF LOVE
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 08:32:43 PM AEST
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With this poem i not only hear them i feel them. A beautiful work of poetic and romantic tapestry.
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Re: THE SOUNDS OF LOVE
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 01:39:07 AM AEST
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I like this a lot. The kind of love you talk about is a kind all too often forgotten; the love of creation and of the good things of mankind's making. It reminds me of the excellent Scottish band Runrig, who sings about love of island, locale and tradition, as well as the beauty of nature, far more than the common romantic love that so overpowers music today.
Well done.
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Re: THE SOUNDS OF LOVE
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by ButchCorpuz on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 11:02:08 AM AEST
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What a very beautiful poem!
Very unique. Very moving.
I find it true that when you're in love...
...every sound creates such melody...
...as to mesmerize you in ecstacy.
Good job! Keep writing!
-Butch
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