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Drowning
Contributed by
Zaz
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Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 03:37:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Drowning in the ocean of confusion,
He's struggling with his feelings inside.
Trying to find the perfect solution,
To find the meaning of this endless fight.
Suddenly the tide was risen too high,
The tide of his nightmares, tide of darkness.
Flooding his dreams, his hopes, all of his life,
In his restless heart this storm was endless.
Now he's lying in sweet unconsciousness:
No sorrow, no pain, no battle inside.
His soul is flying, flying in brightness,
It's finally free - It will never die.
Copyright ©
Zaz
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2006-05-29 15:37:11]
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Re: Drowning
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by Kevin on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 08:36:10 PM AEST
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For a first poem, that was awesome. I loved the allusion to the ocean throughout the poem, really great work on this one.
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Re: Drowning
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by Elite on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 08:17:45 AM AEST
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| this was a really beautiful poem...tres bein! |
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Re: Drowning
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by mali on
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| i think this poem is sad but it is written beautifly. Good job!! |
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